This nice composition was written by one of my students after explaining some “writing tips” in class. It took her no longer than ten minutes to do it.
If you read it, you’ll find a short and clear introduction, the main paragraph, with information, details and opinions, and a conclusion:
Nowadays, tattoos are seen very often drawn on people’s bodies, with different shapes and meanings. Getting a tattoo could be a risk since it’s a permanent drawing, unless you get it removed with laser, but this takes a lot of time and money. It could also be quite dangerous if it’s not done with cleaned machines. Even though it has more negative than positive aspects, in my opinion they are nice and attractive and the people who get something tattooed on them tend to be sure enough that they won’t regret it, since it’s usually something meaningful. Therefore I’m in favour of them.
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